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  • abysmal-outfits@alien.topBtoSmall BusinessWebsite refined
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    1 year ago

    For about us page I put through some grammar checks

    " SpartanGadget Store is the industry leader in stylish and thoughtful mobile accessories and smart gadgets. We use premium materials and functional designs to transform your phone into an accessory to boast about.

    SpartanGadget Store ensures that every design is built to protect and complement your style. Whether equipped with military-grade shock-absorbing layers or co-molded 10-foot drop protection, our products are engineered to withstand drops from various heights on a range of surfaces, preserving your phone’s integrity. We offer a variety of case designs for the newest smartphones, including iPhone 13 Pro Max, iPhone 13 Pro, iPhone 13, and iPhone 13 Mini.

    In addition to our attention to detail and design expertise, SpartanGadget Smartphone cases and screen protectors are all backed by reliable warranties. This guarantee reflects our confidence in our products. If you ever require a replacement, our dedicated customer service team is available to assist you!"

    On the homepage you have screenshots of texts + product which is bad because your website has no SEO because you are missing H1 H2 H3 headers which help site crawlers find and categories your website. Is this a local store? I would add a address about the store again helps with SEO.

    I don’t know the pricing of $14.90 seems off people tend to trust the 14.99 for example really minor detail though

    I don’t know about the market to be honest its easier to buy these products on amazon or other sites. How are the sales?





  • I would create a landing,page,

    Create a marketing message to stand out like “start ups for real people” instead of the high elites of y-combinator where if you are not from standford you are not getting in.

    I would post youtube content have a CTA to action and link to the landing page and links to discord.

    Record a start up competition and post the journey on youtube.







  • You are need to patent your formula that is the most important thing. That mixture needs to be written down in specific amounts so manufacture can scale it easily.

    Then a secondary thing is to develop a brand and logo. You have audience & that helps lot.

    In the US anyways there are these mid-size business that will take your concept from idea to reality

    For example here is one https://www.snakking.com/ they make snacks?

    https://www.bluelabelpackaging.com/ they make beer bottles and whiskey.

    When you go with one of these co-packages they are going cost lot of money. So the low-risk option for is to work with someone on friverr get a logo and 3D render of your product. Create pre-orders and with your list of pre-order information and total amount of pre-order sales is leverage that against a investors. There also small to mid size investors.

    Personally you need to chose the business professional website with good grammar. if the grammar is bad on the site that is the sign they are bad and don’t care.

    Your idea sounds awesome, if you need a business partner DM me or consulting I have lot of tech, website UX, and shopify experience. I have also developed two brands and 2 logos.