Hello everyone!

A couple of days ago I started running ads to my landing page and after 124 clicks and 0 sales I scraped it completely and started over.

Here is the new page: https://repounce.com/pages/early-bird-pre-launch-offers

I only run ads to mobile-devices, so this is completely optimized for mobile. It looks a bit whacky on desktop.

Now, I really hope that this one performs, but it would be great to get feedback from some of you on what you would change!

Thanks, really appreciate it!

  • BenefitAmbitious8958@alien.topBEnglish
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    10 months ago

    Great landing page!

    The only thing I would eventually change is the central videos to professional videography in a more controlled setting

    The current videography looks like it was shot by an amateur on a newer iPhone, and while it isn’t bad, it does tone down the professionalism of the site

    It could be better staged and directed, with some shots being faster paced, some shots being slowed down, and more moments utilizing emotional psychology (aka, silly cats) to trigger dopamine in prospective clients