Hello everyone!

A couple of days ago I started running ads to my landing page and after 124 clicks and 0 sales I scraped it completely and started over.

Here is the new page: https://repounce.com/pages/early-bird-pre-launch-offers

I only run ads to mobile-devices, so this is completely optimized for mobile. It looks a bit whacky on desktop.

Now, I really hope that this one performs, but it would be great to get feedback from some of you on what you would change!

Thanks, really appreciate it!

  • Visual_Youth_5073@alien.topBEnglish
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    10 months ago

    The website checks off a lot of boxes, but really the issue is messaging. Like why should I buy a $50 cat play stick over a $5 one at Petsmart? I think you need to show your product in use more or have testimonials.

    • DistinctTaste7878@alien.topOPBEnglish
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      10 months ago

      That’s very true. I think I need more UGC and reviews.

      And to your question - our cat wand is the only one where you can attach toys/baits directly at the tip. The other “solid stick” designs have all been single use, and our cats love the variety that it offers to have both with and without string!

  • AverageLiberalJoe@alien.topBEnglish
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    10 months ago

    Pictures maybe it look cheap. Color theme make it look cheap. Video is too fast and doesn’t show me any of the value you claim your product has. Also it looks like a tik tok video which immediately make me think ‘fake’. And the video also looks cheap.

    At least your selling proposition was up front and center but the price was not. “Unbreakable cat you holder” ok fine, I had a cat. I don’t remember that being a problem i ever wished was solved but maybe someone else does.

    Im typing now and I can’t remember what it was even called. If have no way of speaking word of mouth even if I wanted to.

    It looks like you have zero sales and make this at home. As in there is no social proof. I don’t want to be the first guy to send you money.

    If it was my product, I think Id try to tell a story about a guy who made a company to sell innovative and high quality pet toys after getting frustrated with cheap imported garbage filled with microplastics and factory residue from big name pet brands who don’t actually have animal friendly business practices.

  • Last_Time5091@alien.topBEnglish
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    10 months ago

    I don’t have a background in what the product is (not a pet person) but I felt the video on the first fold moved too fast , especially the transition between the main copy and the follow up line Also video + moving text together confuses me where to focus. Is text the core message or the video?

  • wineheda@alien.topBEnglish
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    10 months ago

    Your pre-launch banner should say “with free shipping” not “for free shipping”. I also don’t like that I can’t see the price until I click on the preorder button, idk if that’s standard practice or just me

  • brujababe666@alien.topBEnglish
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    10 months ago

    It’s pretty good 😊 gets to the point- I would also suggest adding a gifting option for those of us who dont have cats but have friends that do!

  • thomasmagnum@alien.topBEnglish
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    10 months ago

    I have cats so I’m your target market. Your page does not tell me - at all - why your cat toy is better than the others.

    It doesn’t break… is it metal? Really the video is terrible. Work on a better video and it’ll double as social ads.

  • jibrie8@alien.topBEnglish
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    10 months ago

    Video is not good.

    Pictures are not good.

    Start with your question (problem statement) “Tired of cats…”, and then “Meet Forever Stick”.

  • YSApodcast@alien.topBEnglish
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    10 months ago

    “Pre order” on the button makes me think I’m signing up to some sort of fundraising. If I but this is it getting shipped to me right away?

  • orange-capri-sun@alien.topBEnglish
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    10 months ago

    Honestly, I love the website, it has a great video for demonstration and is straight to the point which is so important bc the buyer wouldn’t feel confused as to what the product is.

      • orange-capri-sun@alien.topBEnglish
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        10 months ago

        I am indeed, and I’m compelled to buy the product, it’s genuinely something I’d put my money into knowing it’s tried and tested instead of buying loads of the cheaper options bc they always snap

        • DistinctTaste7878@alien.topOPBEnglish
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          10 months ago

          Thank you! If you’d be open to it I’d love to have a quick video call with you, just to get feedback and hear your thoughts on the product and on our messaging. Then I can also properly show the product for you! Let me know if you would consider this. Thanks!