Hello everyone!

A couple of days ago I started running ads to my landing page and after 124 clicks and 0 sales I scraped it completely and started over.

Here is the new page: https://repounce.com/pages/early-bird-pre-launch-offers

I only run ads to mobile-devices, so this is completely optimized for mobile. It looks a bit whacky on desktop.

Now, I really hope that this one performs, but it would be great to get feedback from some of you on what you would change!

Thanks, really appreciate it!

  • Last_Time5091@alien.topBEnglish
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    10 months ago

    I don’t have a background in what the product is (not a pet person) but I felt the video on the first fold moved too fast , especially the transition between the main copy and the follow up line Also video + moving text together confuses me where to focus. Is text the core message or the video?