I have a job that suck, toxic people can’t bear them anymore. I have 3 months before my internship is completed. So i decided to start my software agency. I built my website https://jsgdevelopers.com/. I bought a bunch of leads from fiverr, basically those businesses who had shitty website. I pitched about 5 people but no one is even responding back. I feel really demotivated. Here is one of the email i sent just for example

Dear [Customer Name],

I hope this message finds you well. I’ve had the pleasure of reviewing your pressure washing website , and I believe there are two critical areas for improvement.

Design: A captivating design is essential to leave a lasting impression. Our expertise lies in crafting sleek, modern designs that captivate your audience.

Mobile-Friendliness: In today’s digital landscape, mobile compatibility is paramount, especially for a service-oriented business like yours. We specialize in creating seamless experiences across all devices.

I’d be honored to collaborate with you on building a website that truly reflects the potential of . Let’s chat further about how we can make this happen.

Looking forward to the possibility of working together.

Warm regards,

My Name

and company logo and website link and mobile number and location as signature

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I don’t know what is wrong. Are my emails not personalized enough? (i even attached some screenshot of their website in 1 of cold email). Is it sounding fishy? Or its just luck not working out

Any help would be highly appreciated

  • Fair-Distribution-51@alien.topBEnglish
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    11 months ago

    Well I see a few things you haven’t considered 1) you’ll have pain in the ass clients working for yourself too, only difference is you can choose to not work with them at that point 2) buying leads from fiverr you’ll likely get the same list they sold to everyone else. And each of them probably gets 5 emails a day about redoing their website. 3) pitching 5 clients is nowhere near enough to know if it’s working or not. You’ll need to contact 100 to even start to decide if it’s working or not 4) business owners get 20 emails a day pitching them for services and web design is the main one so you’ll need to be better than everyone else or try be unique in some way