spartangadget.com I heard what everyone been saying about the store honestly I was stuck I felt like I was wasting money and time on the store but my father help me refined it I hope I simplify it please tell me what y’all think about it
spartangadget.com I heard what everyone been saying about the store honestly I was stuck I felt like I was wasting money and time on the store but my father help me refined it I hope I simplify it please tell me what y’all think about it
Hi! Copywriter here :) Your website is easy to navigate, which is great! I’d change the headline & body text on your home page (the part beginning with “Why we are the best place…”). Right now, it’s focused on you, the brand, rather than the value you bring to your audience. It also sounds a bit sales-y/tacky and lacks authentic personality. The same goes for your About page.
I absolutely love how you have testimonials, and you have a great collection of products.