Assuming you are a VC investor in healthcare. Let me know which of these two email templates below interests you the most if any.
Dear David
We have a unique approach to cancer drug discovery that will reduce timelines for cancer treatment developments by enhancing access to critical research and data. Current delays in information impact the timing of drugs which will mean life or death for millions of people each year. Most innovative cancer drugs are facing delays in reaching patients, because regulators are not keeping up with the pace of progress along with the shortage of human resources leading to delays from patent to patients, for current cancer patients a delay of just a few weeks could mean life or death.
We are solving this issue by building a platform where researchers and scientists freely exchange ideas, data, and information related to cancer. This unrestricted access removes barriers and allows specialists from diverse fields to build on each other’s work,
I would like an opportunity to have a call with you and show you how this works
How about this Thursday at 3:30 pm?
Emmanuel.
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Hello Mr/Mrs X
The current landscape of cancer treatment development is marked by significant delays, jeopardizing the lives of millions of patients. The challenges, ranging from regulatory hurdles to resource shortages, have prompted us to devise a unique approach that accelerates the exchange of crucial research and data among scientists and researchers.
By creating an environment that fosters open collaboration, which no one is doing, we break down barriers and expedite the journey from patent to patients allowing scientists to build on each other’s work. This is especially crucial for cancer patients, where even a brief delay could be a matter of life or death.
Our approach has the potential to make a substantial impact on the timely delivery of groundbreaking cancer treatments.
The purpose of this message is to ask for an opportunity to meet you and show how this works How about this Thursday at 3:30 pm?
Emmanuel
Mention your unique approach right at the beginning to create immediate interest. The closing could be a bit more concise.
Thanks for the feedback, what do you think of this?
Hello Mr David,
we’re building an open-source cancer drug and treatment discovery platform, that centralizes data, and human resources and fosters global collaboration by providing bounty incentives for experts, leading to improvements in drug discovery timelines, better data centralization, and a reduction in research redundancy, The global market for it is at $205.52 billion and we have a unique niche positioning with a clear revenue stream, Warm regards,
I thought you would be interested in hearing our story because of your experience at X. If you have 15 minutes, I would love to show you our product over Zoom or we can also continue this over email.
Warm regards, Emmanuel