Hi everyone, I’ve finished my landing page for my Design as a Service product for SaaS companies. I’d really like some feedback so here’s the link: https://www.tajen.studio/. This is the first iteration of the page and I really tried not to overcomplicate things as I have a terrible habit of being too much of a perfectionist. So I always try to think of the quote: "Perfectionism is procrastination masquerading as quality control.”

I’d like to know:

  • If my value proposition is clear
  • If you’re a SaaS company, is this a service you might consider? If not, could you elaborate on why not?
  • general comments on what you like and don’t like about the page

If you’re familiar with DesignJoy, then you’ve seen this model before. I’ve done a few things differently such as niching down (SaaS companies), only taking a set number of clients at a time, and actually doing some meetings (I like getting to know the clients, it seems more personal!).

Thank you for reading this and for your time if you do provide feedback!

  • CaptainAdam231@alien.topB
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    11 months ago

    Design is great! “Your design needs taken care of for less than the cost and hassle of hiring a full-time designer” is kind of complicated and took me a moment to get. It’s in a passive voice. Consider: “We can take of your design for less than the cost and hassle of hiring a full-time designer.”

    • sausageroll5000@alien.topOPB
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      10 months ago

      Thank you for the feedback :) Based on feedback from others too, the hero section does need some work. I’ll add this to the list!