Marketing expert here. I love your concept, and I think your landing page explains what it does very well followed by the benefits of that, also very well.
Rather than trying to go into too much detail explaining what it does, you provide an example that they can use to actually see for themselves exactly what it does.
Overall, I think to this point, it is very succinct and hard to fault.
For me, it goes wrong once you hit the pricing bit. There are too many unanswered questions.
How long am I signing up for?
How much notice do I have to give to cancel?
Why is there no trial period?
In short, you are asking people for a commitment, but providing insufficient information. The biggest fault from my point of view is no trial period. Or free plan. People need to be able to install it and see how it works on their site before they will be comfortable signing up to a longer term commitment.
Marketing expert here. I love your concept, and I think your landing page explains what it does very well followed by the benefits of that, also very well.
Rather than trying to go into too much detail explaining what it does, you provide an example that they can use to actually see for themselves exactly what it does.
Overall, I think to this point, it is very succinct and hard to fault.
For me, it goes wrong once you hit the pricing bit. There are too many unanswered questions.
In short, you are asking people for a commitment, but providing insufficient information. The biggest fault from my point of view is no trial period. Or free plan. People need to be able to install it and see how it works on their site before they will be comfortable signing up to a longer term commitment.