rem4ik4ever@alien.topB to EntrepreneurEnglish · 1 year ago

Roast my landing page 🔥🔥

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Roast my landing page 🔥🔥

rem4ik4ever@alien.topB to EntrepreneurEnglish · 1 year ago

Hey! I want to build SaaS to help businesses and professionals streamline booking process from creation to getting paid. Here is my landing page: calwise.ca

Roast it well! 🔥🔥

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Hi rem4ik4ever :)

First comment: Unclear value statement at readers’ first glance. You don’t say it til the very end, “Unlock Efficient Booking!”. E.g. check this out: https://www.reddit.com/r/SaaS/comments/17tjr3i/i\_analyzed\_100\_hero\_sections\_of\_mostly\_saas/

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